one scary night

Once upon, a time it was a dark and scary night a girl her name was caroline she was on the bed and she saw creepy hands crawling under her bed.  she looked at it and she thought it was going to eat her but when it was a great morning she looked under her bed carefully under her bed she yelled but nothing was there she said to herself it was just one scary nightmare for one scary night.

dremworld

dreamworld is a place that has lots and fun parks at dreamworld.

feedbacks from our teachers

we did a practice test then our teachers gave as feedback. here is my writing with my teachers feedback.

kind things about myself