morning tea time
Today at morning tea time me and hope-T and stanley and me were staying inside because we i had a sore leg so we asked miss asharley if we can stay inside. and she said yes. so we said thank you but when i saw hope-T asked me if she can have an basket and i said yes and she said thank you. we were drawing pictures and then the bell rang and the Room 6 people came in and and we grabbed our book and started writing.
Hi Dziah, I like how you have added detail to your story by adding who was there and what the people said. Have you checked that your story has the full stops and capital letters in the right places?
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angle finish of your reading work.
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